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Agent Feedback (Jan. 23, 2014)

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Agent Feedback (Jan. 23, 2014)
Mike and I just got off of a conference call with Miles the agent. It was great to hear he liked the outline and said it had good potential worth pushing. He gave some very helpful feedback too. First, he said we have to decide what our "voice" would be in our writing. Are we going to use "we" or be non-personal. Whichever way, we had to be consistent. Then he pointed out the part he thought was the weakest part. It was exactly the place that Mike and I thought he would. He reacted to our working titles and gave us some tips on what makes a good title and subtitle. We left the call with a bunch of "to do's" and an agreement to get something back to Miles soon.
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